Not really my cup of tea (if i listen to electronic music at all it would be ulver, kruder & dorfmeister or something instrumental\ chill out)
I think the chorus is catchy and holds a pretty high standard compared to the rest of the song. Didn't care too much for the vocals during the verses, and the song really didn't need the guitar-solo-thingy. I would "start over", using the chorus as a basis and then go from there.
Sorry if that was too harsh critisism! It was all meant as a musician-to-a-musician kind of honesty