I need an Honest Answer on what to improve. I compose this Relaxing & Deep Sleep Music for Quarantine
- Thread starter humpee
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happyrat1
Destroyer of Eardrums!!!
The bits I listened to sounded technically OK, but it's not really my genre of music.
Don't expect a lot of people here to audition the whole track though.
33 minutes of lifetime is a lot to ask of a passing stranger.
Would YOU stand with me and listen for a half hour if I asked you to hear the word of Jehova? Or better yet, Satan???
Gary
Don't expect a lot of people here to audition the whole track though.
33 minutes of lifetime is a lot to ask of a passing stranger.
Would YOU stand with me and listen for a half hour if I asked you to hear the word of Jehova? Or better yet, Satan???
Gary
Rayblewit
Love Music / Love Life
I agree with Gary.
I had a curious listen to tidbits. I got a bit bored with it. Nice music nevertheless but a 3 minute track would suffice.
I heard 20 second snippets x 6 places.
Ray
I had a curious listen to tidbits. I got a bit bored with it. Nice music nevertheless but a 3 minute track would suffice.
I heard 20 second snippets x 6 places.
You got it!
Ray
Welcome.
Like Gary and Ray, I listened to snippets.
I actually found the first section grating in tone, it is to repetitive for my taste and the instrument choice would be better with one which has a more softer tone which would be more in keeping with the theme of the piece.
Moving on the remainder is quite good and you hit the target for the type of music that you have aimed the piece at.
No doubt you have really enjoyed creating the piece and hats off to you for offering it up to us for critique.
Best wishes
Like Gary and Ray, I listened to snippets.
I actually found the first section grating in tone, it is to repetitive for my taste and the instrument choice would be better with one which has a more softer tone which would be more in keeping with the theme of the piece.
Moving on the remainder is quite good and you hit the target for the type of music that you have aimed the piece at.
No doubt you have really enjoyed creating the piece and hats off to you for offering it up to us for critique.
Best wishes
Rayblewit
Love Music / Love Life
Actually, @humpee You slipped through the net; under the radar so to speak!
I am surprised that this music vid of yours even got through the system.
By rights, as you have only just joined us, you are supposed to pass protocol of certain criteria before posting this.
You are lucky to get the response you asked for.
I trust you appreciate that.
Anyway I welcome you. And I trust you will contribute to the discussions.
cheers Ray
I am surprised that this music vid of yours even got through the system.
By rights, as you have only just joined us, you are supposed to pass protocol of certain criteria before posting this.
You are lucky to get the response you asked for.
I trust you appreciate that.
Anyway I welcome you. And I trust you will contribute to the discussions.
cheers Ray